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Truly funny lmao!

I found this to be a truly funny flash. The drawings were good and the jokes made throughout the flash was funny and creative lol. I found the Mr. Popo one to be one of the funniest, while the one where Vegeta was getting blasted by the Kamehameha, spirit bomb, and sat on by the Oozaru (h/e you spell it) was the funniest.

Good job with the humor and thx for uploading this to Newgrounds for people like me to see. You all did a good job with your parts.

Snicp responds:

thanks :)

Good but short

As a sprite artist I have to say that the animation was nice, but it was too short. If you put some length on it and some actual fighting man to man then you'd have a good sprite fight on your hands.

Other than that nice animating though.

xSTACHUx responds:

thx for the tips :] and it meant to be short

Pretty good

That was good, didn't really see any glaring errors but unless my computer is just going slow then the movements could of been just a bit more smoother. Try to up the action a bit, sprites hitting each other around without any extra effect kind of gets boring.

Overall good job though and good luck with the rest of the series

Flash-Gamers responds:

Thanks man!

Hmmm....

This needs work...I use the same sprites so if you need to see someone else with better animation then check me out (only helping). You first off need a background just so it will look better when they fight, then you need to cut the sprites out better (seen the background still on some of the poses).

Get more variety of sound effects, if you need some then PM me and I'll get to you :). Try better to place the sprites behind each other so the animation will look smoother...also get some music so you can set a battle mood.

There's more stuff to be done but this is basically the basics, if you do this then I guarantee you a higher score ;).

Hagoshi responds:

Thank you for your helpful review. About the sound effects i really would use some help... So if you still wanna help i'll PM you.

Short and sweet

I like it, prob one of the best use of dragonball sprites on this site. Nice use of the camera and the effects, smooth animation as well. Only thing I'd suggest is making it longer although this did just fine anyway. Good job and keep up the good work!

Zheg responds:

thanks (y)

I thought it was ok

IMO the fight scene wasn't all that, I think it went to fast...but the storyline and the animation itself was very smooth, nice quality as well. Overall good work =D

Also I would try to blur your stages when you loop them instead of just moving them, it gives it more motion and makes everything seem faster.

flashman16 responds:

thanks for your thoughts, i appreciate them

but i have absolutely no idea how to blur images, i would if i could though, thanx anyway

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